this is a re-edit and should replace any previous versions

can u tell me who's the artist of this?

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raw : https://e-hentai.org/g/155558/258a9a50e3/
or https://e-hentai.org/g/320054/7eabf33fe1/ ........page065 (Replace above link?)

Would you mind if I request Yumesaki Sanjuro's work? =P

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Alright, come on, at least get the title right.

On the other hand, the contractions are a HUGE improvement. Except for a lack in eloquence, it's sounding more or less natural now, if inelegant and hackneyed.

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First I thought he churns these out for the easy GP, but he's on the H@H toplists — a contributing member of the site and probably swimming in credits/hath! So I'm as baffled as you are gentlemen... Well, I do have a theory, but it's insane — maybe he actually ENJOYS rewriting. Nonsense, right?

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