Hello guys!

I decided to change the way I update the comics, instead of spending a whole month rendering and then update gallery, I'll update once a week at least.

I also decided, as you already noticed, to present my comics in a way similar to a traditional comic book. I took this decision because I believe it respects more the time and attetion spam you readers deposit in my work.

So what are you thinking about the comics until now? I am a beginner and i believe there is a lot room for improvement.

So, if you want to support me, and only if you want to, you can go to: https://www.patreon.com/ChocoH4z3.

You need a skilled English speaker to re-write your text, it's terrible.

Base +6, Higers +7, TimeSucker -4, m3jn95 -6, JinkXie +6, ajarlube +6, Patito Papito +6, peligromayor +2, derad +8, shinangels +19, infernov4 +6, 1112215002a +7

What a mess. Looks and reads like an incoherent patchwork.

Base +3, peligromayor +2, iggy1297 -9, derad -8, Kael Hyun -10, infernov4 +6, 1112215002a -7

gothprincess279

Care to elaborate? I am genuinely looking for ways to improve.

Base +6, peligromayor +2, 1112215002a +7

Pretty good comic! I think the pacing is a bit fast - I'd have preferred a more gradual corruption than simply sex from the get-go - but that's more of a personal preference. The conversations at the beginning felt a little robotic, but it seems to have smoothed out, and the grammar and layout of the panels is generally fine - people just like to complain on the internet. Keep going; it's a fun read, and I'm interested to see what's next!

Base +6, ajarlube +6, peligromayor +2, Kael Hyun +10

@lafn
the pacing of it feels very rushed. It was hard to keep track of what was going on after he walks into the kitchen.

As for a comic that also has a story tied to it, it felt weirdly off. Events happened and everyone just went with it. Sure works for a sex-driven story but then it feels more like a white-room fuck where things just happen so people can fuck if you catch my drift.

Base +3, peligromayor +2, Kael Hyun -10

I rewrote the first chapter, you ok with that? and what do you think? https://e-hentai.org/g/3306201/b15260b495/

Base +5

@SuperrPervert

Yes. It's okay, I don't mind.

Base +6

Wtf guys, why this comic is only 2.93 star, it's very nice corruption with bimbofication elements content which is very rare now, perosnally I love this comic, it hits right to my spot. I don't know what is your problem with rushing plot, It's way better than these year long (ongoing) comics that posts 10 pages a week and transformation takes months, cmon guys we are here in one purpose after all.

Base +6

I like the comic so far. But from a visual perspective I wish the characters, both female and male, were more realistic and have pubic hair. Otherwise it just gives off a vibe that subliminally they could be prepubescent, regardless of disclaimers. Unless that is the context you are wanting to subliminally portray in which case goal achieved.

Base +6

Kind of disapointed he let the sister be banged by random dudes and a transexual. Also reaaaaally not a fan of futa. I wish we could follow the male character improving, become more powerful/demonic. I'm not interested by some guy with tits stealing the focus from and cucking our male protagonist.

Base +6