Proofread MTL.

At least you're honest about it.
The typeset is pretty solid, though. Have you thought about joining a group?

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Thanks I hate it

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CF.....betrays....

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Taisetsu na Tsuma ga Iru noni...... 10-Kai Shasei Shinai to Derenai Heya de Kinkyuu Boukensha no Elite Osananajimi ni Okasarete Shimatta Hanashi

Jezus fucking christ, what's with the title length of some hentai/manga.

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Song recommendation
Shut Up!
By Simple Plan
Yes I’m telling you to also shut up

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Honestly I'm not proud of myself

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We need more of this

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We need a sequel

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I kinda feel sad for the wife, even as a background character

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nowdays titles are long because japanese people need to know the plot just like that or they dont buy anything. things aside, this one and the other one of the loli magical girl defeating and abusing a demon general, i find them so hilarious that they become truly hot.

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I really wonder if the guy was really that dense that he didn't notice her wearing the earring, didn't think anything about her garb barely covering anything, and didn't remember or think it odd she used to "mark" him when they were younger. Or if he was a heavily-closeted hard M that remembered her treatment of him and went into the dungeon subconsciously hoping for something like this to happen. It's probably left vague to allow the reader to self-insert better.

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