A random guy who really, really likes this doujin but doesn't have the money to hire a real translator and got impatient.

You want to MTL something? Go for it. But for fucks sake, keep it to yourself. We don't want your shit.

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You don't want to read something? Go for it. But for fucks sake, keep it to yourself. We don't want the shit spewing from you mouth.
Don't want to read MTL? then don't it is right there in the title. Learn to read.

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Honestly, I've seen actual translations far worse then this edited MTL.

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Your typesetting sucks and it's unreadable. You are as lazy and incompetent with everything as you are with translation. This isn't even possible to enjoy in any capacity and believe me I've tried. fuck yo mtl

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She got ultra doses of everything, and isn't actually mentally crippled in the end; given how shes getting excited when awake, I honestly don't see this working as a crime deterrent?

And how does that rest bed work? It doesn't seem to be the VR itself with no disconnect, and it was STILL blocking out her senses even after they carried her away (there is no reason they'd return her to the bed for the actual execution)

And that remote hand at the beginning, is it the only thing controlled mentally? because it sure acts as if shes directly controlling it, but everything else is basically on/off switches?

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Honestly the reason it sucks is because you're not a translator. It doesn't matter to you if machine-generated sentences look bad since you've spent no real effort on them. Someone with any amount respect for their translation skills would've at least learnt the surrounding topics a bit, but you don't have translation skills. Nor any of the skills required in scanlation.
Anyways, my bad, the doujin is good, here's the

RAW: https://e-hentai.org/g/3345529/bcd10a2fab/

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It's honestly pretty good for an MTL. The typesetting could use work, sure, but it's totally readable. It would be a different thing if this was commissioned or something, but this was a normal dude doing everything for free. I wouldn't mind more MTL like this if it means more works are available in English.

Maybe we just need a MTL tag so the purists can filter it out.

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It's funny; we're on a site dedicated to pirating manga and doujin, but people still bitch and complain that what they're getting for free isn't as good as what someone who paid for a translation gets. Maybe don't be entitled little bitches; none of your profiles shows any contribution to this or any related sites, you're just parasites looking for free fap material but bitch if it isn't good enough for you.

You don't like it? Move along. Some of us would rather have a free mediocre translation than not have one at all. You want a good translation job? Get off your cheap asses and pay for one. Otherwise, you're just whiny little entitled karens.

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You want an MTL? Do it yourself. There are multiple sites out there that do even the editing for you.

But don't throw that shit on our faces. The arguments have been posted a hundred times, so I'm not going to bother yet again. Just fuck-off with the MTL slop already.

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