p5 "I'm shock" "I'm shocked" p6 "I already have feelings since first time we meet" →"I've had feelings for you since we first met" p7 "But why you choose me?"→ "But why did you choose me?" p11 "that cannot be a reason we can be going out..." →"That's no reason for us to go out..." p12 "I don't really interested to you..." →"I'm not really interested in you like that..."