I like it. constructive criticim ahoy: 1: Remove some of the speech bubbles, i only need to read them one time. 2: If you draw a few less frames you can add more diffrernce between each frame. Otherwise good artwork, keep it up!
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i also like this short, good art, the repeated speech bubbles was kind of a nuisance but not bad work in all. next time, maybe add another character and something that they are doing for some kind of story. good detail.