Part 1: https://e-hentai.org/g/3461263/d2e50fb887/

does this have a maker like patreon user ur made this urself?

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More, begin the spiral into corruption

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No Patreon user. I made it myself.

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I see keep up the work hope it stays netorase most netorase just ends up being near NTR or for some reason makes it humiliation fetish

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@umasakapa. I don’t mind if it tips towards NTR and some humiliation as so far the character development gives that some credence. Zero two is a bit of a nympho with desires she’s suppressing as seen in part 1 and now we see she’s willing to lie to her BF as seen in this part where she says the old man insisted he wear a condom but we know that’s a lie. I’d like to see the story develop with zero two trying to keep to her promises but have the old man push the boundary using loopholes and such. Could have her become more affectionate as consolation with her doing more intimate things with the old man. Could even see Hiro giving in to his own desires and allowing more to happen though so far we haven’t seen him disparage himself or his own ability to please his GF so don’t think he would seek humiliation though the old man might try something to try and make zero two like hiro less so he can try steal her which is in line with his character. Ether way I hope the story can continue and keep things interesting rather than jumping all in on NTR or NTS as I personally find that boring and like when writers blurr the line between the two so we the reader are left wondering how things are going to develop

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To be honest, I’m surprised by how polished this work is. You have a deep understanding of the nuances in the interactions between couples in this kind of game. Your portrayal is impressively accurate. The only drawback is that the text size and layout make it a bit hard to read—there’s quite a lot of text in each image. You might consider splitting longer passages into two parts and increase the font size. Pairing each with a repeated image for better readability.

I’m looking forward to your next work.

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@charlietk3 would rather avoid a netorare no tami situation with too much repeated imagery as it’s just boring. Would rather similar images with small alterations such as going from zero two looking at dick to sucking it instead add an additional image of her sniffing, kissing or licking it. Image would be mostly the same with slight alteration to keep it fresh and allow for text to be spread between the additional images

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Thank you all for the feedback and kind comments. I'm really happy you're enjoying my work.
I'm working on part 3 and aim to have it posted by Friday at the absolute latest.

Part 3: https://e-hentai.org/g/3471761/9416e2afb8/

Part 4 END: https://e-hentai.org/g/3488996/3b23b8e938/

Last edited on 17 August 2025, 02:42.

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