Part 1: https://e-hentai.org/g/3461263/d2e50fb887/
Part 2: https://e-hentai.org/g/3465371/7289bd0bf0/
Their adventure continues. Let me know your thoughts.

keep up the good work just really still pray you dont turn this from NTR to NTS if the Bull makes plots or try to find work around could just try make Bull befriend Hiro that he allows raw rather than secretly if possible

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Great Work!

It’s good to see your following character development. The old man still trying to steal ZeroTwo but becoming a bit more sly with it and trying to play the long game. ZeroTwo delving deeper into her dark desires and even allowing herself to be manipulated so long as it doesn’t explicitly break her promises. Hiro as well continues to let his desires lead his decisions even if it is the wrong thing to do.

I can’t wait to see part 4 as it looks to be a big plot point with zero two and the old man sharing an apartment for a whole month. Can only imaging Unc is going to take the opportunity to really push the limits but he’s going to need to do some real mental manipulation along with the physical if he wants to get any more serious development with zero two. Can see him doing this by perhaps getting zero two to compare his performance to hiro/ mentioning how people with hiros fetish like things developing further out of their control, really manipulate the whole NTS thing by blending in some NTR to really manipulate zero two as she might not fully understand the difference between the two or might be willing to pretend she doesn’t if her desires are dark enough. Hiro will be an interesting one as he surely has to know he’s pushing the line even if he is under the impression that Unc respects his and zerotwo’s relationship (which he obviously doesn’t). Can’t wait to see how this turns out as this next step could begin to bring in some serious NTR elements to muddy the waters and really push the phycological side of things as there’s no way zero two is going to spend a whole month getting fucked by unc and not have some serious changes be it her preferences physically or phycologicaly (maybe her preference for the taste of cum will change 😂) ether way she’s going to come out of this changed. Now we’ll have to wait and see if Unc can pull off some serious 4D chest or will he over play his cards and have to work his way back.

Again fantastic work Morbidxrabs, each post keeps getting better. For someone with only a few posts on their account you’re really doing well. Is this your first time developing such a story or do you have prior experience?

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@Dogdiggity
I have zero experience in storytelling. This is my first time creating *anything*. It's been really eye opening. I do have a ton of experience as a consumer, though. That has informed some of this.
My whole motivation for this was the fact that I've been dying for years for a story like this featuring Zero Two and Hiro. You know the saying, if there's a book you want to read but it doesn't exist, then it's your duty to write it. This is the result.
I'm thrilled that you and several others are enjoying my little story so far. Stay tuned for more!

@umasakapa
I don't wanna spoil anything, so do stay tuned. You'll get your answers!

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Well you’re doing a good job of it for your first time. How’s part 4 coming along, it’ll be interesting to see what little tweaks you make to it to improve upon the work as the way you improved the text from part one was a welcome change. It’ll be interesting to see where your style goes as every creator slowly creates their own destination style, should be interesting to see how yours evolves

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Yeah, I made the text bigger to make it easier to read.
I'm working on part 4, if all goes well it will be up by Friday or so.

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Was also wondering what ai generator your using as it looks different from the others I’ve seen on the site. I’ve no real knowledge on any of them so this might be a stupid question 😂

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I'm using the NovelAI image generator. It's quite powerful a tool, but getting it to do the exact poses and facial expression you want can be quite the struggle.

Small update: Part 4 will be the finale. It's looking like it'll be 200 pages or so. It'll include a small epilogue.
I'm trying hard to have it posted by Friday as promised, but there's a possibility I won't have it ready until Sunday/Monday.
Thanks!

Last edited on 13 August 2025, 04:54.

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Your playing the Battlefield 6 Beta aren’t you 🤣
Take your time, better to treat this as a hobby or you’ll end up hating it

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Part 4 END: https://e-hentai.org/g/3488996/3b23b8e938/

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