Enjoy the transformation of our hero Ash into a horny slut.

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Tags: メス男子, male bitch, 男の娘, otokonoko, 貞操帯. chastity belt, 女装, female clothing, 魅惑のふともも, bewitching thighs, ドMホイホイ, call for the masochists, ポケモン. Pokémon, 女体化. transforming into female, misty, ash, sissy, feminization

Should be flagged as AI generated.

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AI with a story, nice :)

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Cool 😊. I Liked it. Could have been longer though

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What kind of AI workflow do you use?

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very nice，more please

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ridiculously excessive use of "fucking"

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Thanks for feedback and support fam.

To answer your questions
- I try different models such as pony.
- The images are AI generated.
- The dialogues and panels were hand crafted.

Few things I realize can be done better
- Character consistency. This is very hard.
- Language. I agree it is too strong and less submissive.

This is my first hentai comic, hopefully I will improve.

Last edited on 03 July 2025, 05:59.

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Remake? What is it a remake of?

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That was imcomplete version I was working on. https://www.reddit.com/r/sissyhentai0/comments/1lb5mpk/femboy_ashley_chapter_1/

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@missified I don't think anyone was really questioning you on whether AI was used, moreso calling you out on not putting it in the title.

https://ehwiki.org/wiki/Renaming you should probably try to stick to the naming convention for western/3d for this (AI didn't get their section but that one is basically the default for stories that doesn't get written by artists within doujinshi circles and released physically at conventions) but more importantly you forgot to put "[AI Generated]" at the end, which resulted in it dodging blacklist/filters of people who don't want to see AI untill it was fixed through a community rename (sadly not even properly, they should have moved your name to the start and added the (Pokemon) parody indicator but we're not allowed to change anything beyond the AI indicator on imagesets that make up 99% of renames to add the AI indicator so its force of habit not to fix anything else I guess)

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The story is pretty catchy. It has nice hook, good buildup and excellent cliffhanger. It makes me WANT to know what's next.

If not for one MAJOR problem – excessive obscene and profane language. It KILLS entire story, making it almost unreadable. It's one thing, when profane language is used for a specific character to emphasize his/her distinct personality. But when it's thrown left and right – it becomes NARRATIVE element. And this way, the NARRATOR himself/herself become a character. OR it [the profane language] becomes a unique WRITER'S voice. And that's fine, if you had such intention.

But a text with intermixed cussing is UNPLEASANT to read. Unless that is used intentionally for attention-grabbing social manipulation, such as *propaganda*.

Current story NEEDS common language without profanities. It would blend with the images and magnify the impact of the PLOT. And you NEED that, because your story HAS the plot. Even though, it's short and simple, but it IS present.

All-in-all, I'm looking forward for [Part 2].

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@zevana Thanks for honest review.

I agree with you on profane language. You may want to check https://www.reddit.com/r/sissyhentai0/comments/1lb5mpk/femboy_ashley_chapter_1/ . Its incomplete but language wise it would be what you are looking for. I wanted to use more kinky language, and ended up with this. I thought maybe audience will enjoy it more. -_- .

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@missified I checked the reddit post. Indeed. This WAS what I meant. An innocent language, reflecting the anime for kids. It blends well with the source material (the Pokemon anime) and doesn't cause a dissonance, that audience feels when something "is not right" or not how they have used to see it. The language "vanishes", so to speak. Or, in more detail, a reader stops noticing it and focuses on main purpose of a story – plot. The principle is similar to how magicians do their tricks – they distract the audience with something flashy and attention-grabbing while they switch cards or objects to procure a desired effect. The mind can focus only on ONE thing at a time. That's why it works. But if the distraction is TOO INCITING or AROUSING, the trick fails, because audience doesn't care about the end anymore.
This is why the language of the graphic story needs to be strategically placed. Because the driving force behind ANY story is PLOT. And the plot is driven by FEELING. And that is created by actions, that the protagonist takes and troubles, that he/she faces. The less distractions are in the way, the more the audience focuses on the story and the stronger effect it has on them. How else would Gandalf's return have such an immense emotional response during the siege of Helm's Deep?
All-in-all, you can leave it [your story] as it is. The ART is the selling point here. As for the language – audience will get used to it. In time. Long time.
But in any case, you did a SPLENDID job for your FIRST work! Keep it up! I'm dying to see what you come up with next!

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@Zenva, thanks for kind words and insights.I want to share that have finalized the plot and sarted working on chapter-2. Its going slower than last time to level up few things. The story is also without any profanity as of now. But may need it to humiliate Ashley a little.

Language has been fixed here: https://e-hentai.org/g/3467267/5e2c92a490/

Last edited on 18 August 2025, 17:49.

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@Zevana, what follows is the most generic white femboy + black dick scenario you can think of. Count on the white cuck to find a way and fetishize an entire race.

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@Zagazu, you're referring to a *part 2*, right? I've seen it. Just didn't have much time to read, yet. But from the looks of it, the author chose visuals from a "common pool", that MOST of Western authors use. It gives a sense of familiarity. Or, it could be author's personal preference. Who knows? It doesn't look like anything more *serious*. Because, from *such* stand point, femboys are fetishized too. And majority of them don't want to suck dicks.

But, isn't the reason why you and me RED Ashley's story because it is a *porn about a femboy (transgirl, in this case) sucking a dick"? It's a fetish too. Or we can designate it as "our personal preference"...

Anyway, if the story is generic and doesn't have "wow!" effect, but STILL manages to invoke A FEELING of any kind (arousal, in this case), then it's good. In the end, story's purpose is to make us *feel*.

Take a look at LotR. It's plot is generic as much as possible – just take a McGuffin to the volcano and throw it down. That's it. But in reality we get such a rollercoaster, that no story managed to repeat even now. So, why do we LOVE LotR? For a trip to a volcano?
No.
We love it, because it makes us *feel*.

So, generic, non-generic, completely new, ANY story is viable, as long as it creates an emotional response (a rapport).

Missified did a good job on the FIRST story of theirs. Evolution will rectify mistakes. They just need to keep writing/creating.

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Calling LOTR generic is wildly out of touch, it literally started an entire genre. Dunno about the "Most of Western authors" either, since you have no data on it. The fact is that 99% of interracial porn is basically race play (especially in the last 5 years), where one race is put as inferior to another based on perceived characteristic. And that kind of product always comes from the same stereotypical self-hating guilt-ridden for something they never did type of western creator OR open racists. Which at the end of the day only feeds the radicalization against (in this case) blacks.

There is a reason you don't see much "whited" projects, despite the ratings and comments under "blacked" ones being atrocious every single time. Because the authors couldn't care less about the feedback, all they care about is their little agenda being pushed onto the masses. This author in particular literally stated "For me they (blacks) are more masculine." So chill it with the shilling for a bit.

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@Zagazu regarding your "race" issues I have already responded twice in other two posts. In either of chapters no one has been cucked, and if they were I would have put a ntr tag that you can kindly ignore. I see where you are coming from but innocent interrace play should not be seen as race-hate IMHO. There is no perspon/race depcted as inferior/superior in either of publically released chapters. But not everyone sees it as badly you do. That said, in next chapter there are no plans for interrace.

Last edited on 18 August 2025, 19:33.

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