And it's finished!
I had a blast making this. I hope you found it enjoyable at some level too.

Part 1: https://e-hentai.org/g/3461263/d2e50fb887/
Part 2: https://e-hentai.org/g/3465371/7289bd0bf0/
Part 3: https://e-hentai.org/g/3471761/9416e2afb8/

Sad this is the end hope you make more in the future but year this kind of story is ok in the end their together and happy since most netorase ends up being netorare this is alright or the guy being humiliated this is alright since its ends with a some what happy note

Last edited on 17 August 2025, 06:38.

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I dont mind the happy ending though would loved the child to be the old man's or just the uncertainty. Overall good story.

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Well done, that was a great end as it stays consistent to the character development while also creating enough emotional drama to move the story along. Very well written especially for your first work. Again really appreciate the blend of NTR and NTS, really creates tension

Do you plan on making anything else or was this a one off. If you are going to make something else do you have something in mind, if not then would you be interested in requests as I do have something I’d like to pitch to you if you were up for it.

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@umasakapa
Thanks!

@Animefreak117
Glad you liked it!

@Dogdiggity
Thanks! I do want to make for stuff whenever inspiration hits.
What's your pitch?

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Basically a story about Hayase Nagatoro and Naoto Hachiouji from “ Don't Toy With Me, Miss Nagatoro”

A good source of inspiration would be from the fan writing : https://www.hentai-foundry.com/stories/user/xxShiroyakshaxx/53284/Dont-Cuck-Me-Nagatoro-San/138486/Chapter-1/Karaoke-Treat

It has 2 chapters and is quite lengthy but would be good material to find inspiration from as it has a good tone for Nagatoro and Naoto’s relationship due to their personalities. The writer was quite good as even though I haven’t read it in a long time I still remember it.

Character personalities:-

Nagatoro: she’s athletic/ Energetic due to her swimming club activities. She likes Naoto but due to her bad personality she often cruelly teases him as she finds a sadistic pleasure in how pathetic he tends to be (literally out the manga 😂). Confident and playful

Naoto: finds great comfort in his artistic hobbies, anti social, physically weak, unconfident of himself. Though he is a rather awkward individual he is kind hearted and considerate

I would leave the actual story to you as I like to read things I’m not fully aware of but this story would be a blend of NTS and NTR. It would make heavy use of NTR to create tension and I also believe it would be this way mostly due to Nagatoro’s personality especially as things escalate with whatever bull you would choose to create.Should this story have a good end or a bad end I would leave up to you but it would be good if it has a steady progression with things getting more serious and escalating as things progress eg going from inappropriate touching at the start of the story and pregnancy by the end (wither you disclose the father is also up to you). This one may be slightly darker with some use of humiliation due to Naoto’s weak personality but ultimately I’d leave how dark things get up to you and what your comfortable with

You could base the story during the time of the manga/anime when they’re in high school or age them up a bit and place them in college. Only issue with college is I’ve based their personalities off early in their story so they haven’t had the growth they would end up with by the end of the manga.

The story would probably need multiple parts like with your current work on Zero Two

As for the title I’d just copy the one from the fanfic “Don’t Cuck Me, Nagatoro-San!”
I find it to be funny 🤣

In the end it’s a story you can mess with as you like as it can be treated more as an exercise to further build your writing skills by perhaps going into areas you wouldn’t otherwise go.
Main thing would be that you have fun with it 😋

Last edited on 18 August 2025, 22:53.

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That sounds like fun. I'll add it to the list.

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Why not make a Netorase series base on the Harem plan of Momo from To love Ru where momo learns rito has a NTS fetish so she sleeps with either his best friend sarumaru or the principal and convinces the other girls too

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Pretty hot, do you take commissions?

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@Bluecaos
What do you have in mind?

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Great read. Got a good fap out of this since it has old man and consensual too.

Maybe you could make a Sono Bisque Doll. Marin is hot and Gojo might approve of Marin fucking his grandpa.

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