[Tsuyu no Torikago (Shimetsuki Tanki)] Class de Ninki no Gal wa Omorashi to Kanbotsu Chikubi ga Complex Datta. | The popular gal in my class had a wetting and inverted nipple complex. [English]
If I got something wrong, don't be afraid to let me know in the comments and tell me what the correct translation is and why. I'm always trying to improve with each translation I do as the more I do these, the more I realize that just because you can understand what it says doesn't always mean you can translate it.
on p.14, you put "as excepted". It should be "as expected". Although the whole 'sasuga' thing isn't used in actual english conversation, so if you were going for an authentic english sounding localization, it would be phrased differently.