this is my new comic i've been working on for nearly a full week now with 4-5 hours a day it's still ongoing because this one is long and i've massively improved with koikatsu every page takes a few hours minimum but i really wanted to share what i've made already, also i will be making a subscribestar really soon probably in a week or so with early access a week before releasing the next part for 5 dollars-euro's also thumbnail is for later also i do have a discord join if you want: https://discord.gg/mh2TK2Cn

also should have said this but there might still be some problems with some of the pages i'm fully aware i will fix everything soon i just really wanted to know what you all thought of my newest koikatsu comic i spent so much time on this like way to much

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Great content, keep up the good work :)

Only critique i have is that the text on some pages is so small its pretty much unreadable.

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hejjhajj: yeah i might do that it's not the first time i've seen that complaint i'll fix it and then reupload it maybe tommorow also thanks i will making this while an insane amount of work which is why i'm setting up a subscriberstar soon was so much fun to make but this amount of work isn't a hoby anymore making this comic is a full-time job

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More of the male pov less of the females'. If theres nothing interesting going on that close just have far away shots or more on how the futanari is feeling or thinking about while getting sucked.
Think about this.
Do you really think a significant enough portion of your audience is here imagining themselves as the futa fucking a guy, or are jerking off to the guy and what his thoughts and words are?

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cocoasweet: yes actually, taker-pov is a pretty well-liked pov and extremely underused, plus there are plenty of pov shots from the girls perspective, side views, and other views put in for variety so there is something for everyone, i mean atleast for me it's one of the reasons i love futa on male, because i like to imagine me being the guy.

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Really not bad, I would make the cock like feel more bigger instead of just being straight. Also I'm some scenes I would make it like it's difficult for him to suck her, and while she tries to shove it we need to feel some resistance. Also I would have make it pass out at the end, and while. he pass out, she continue to fuck his throat and he finally wake up but with her soft cock still in his mouth. Beside that I put 5 stars my self because it's promising

Also make the text bigger

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(Gnaman) next story i could make the cock bigger, i think i've figured put how to make it fit into their mouths, also i already do resistance into his mouth, also her fucking his mouth while he's passed out goes against her character and how i've written her, also this story is (ongoing), there is still many scenes to come later.

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or maybe, what if instead of having the dick bigger on the get go. how about having it grow as the story progresses. since you said you want to make stories that are on the long side, having some short time skips could be an option.

either way im very excited for this and your future stories.

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