I guess there was an attempt at TS'ing... Im not sure if this is your first time or not, but there are some rules to shaping text that would have gone a long way with making this more readable, as well as cleaning the text bubbles better. Also what is with your blurry ass extra page. If your going to meme, at least take some pride in it.

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General resources: [quicksandscans.wordpress.com] https://quicksandscans.wordpress.com/resources/
Typesetting: [web.archive.org] https://web.archive.org/web/20190406011154/https://fallensyndicate.wordpress.com/typesetting-tutorial/
Redrawing: [web.archive.org] https://web.archive.org/web/20150421210157/http://www.redhawkscans.com/showthread.php?7057-Rain-s-Redraw-Tutorials
Basic cleaning: [www.youtube.com] https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PANrCwHy630

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yahooooooo

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this is my first ever translation so im sorry if its hard to read. im open to suggestions and advice.
i had a ton of fun doing this translation tho my art skills are subpar to say the least.
also idk what happened to the extra page, it was fine till the pre-publish gallery then randomly decided to change the resolution.
looking forward to learning from you and the other senior translators!

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Here are more guides for you:

AnonBlack's Typesetting Guide: https://mangadex.org/title/08e1f85a-bb12-4fe4-aec5-0d7a80b3a261/anonblack-s-typesetting-guide?tab=chapters
The Idiots' Guide to editing Manga: https://www.insidescanlation.com/etc/the-idiots-guide-to-editing-manga/guide/main

And also PLEASE use the original size images in the future instead of the standard downscale resolution images. You can download the original sized images via :
0. stay away from scrapper sites like nh as they mostly just grab the images at viewing quality
1. torrent download (if available) or
2. the "Archive Download" button.

I hope keep having fun in the future.

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Thank you for translating this! It's a readable TL for me so I'm fine with it! I wish you the best as you perfect your craft.

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Good stuff dude, looking forward to what you do in the future

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This is the same Marimo that does lolis too?

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Thank you weird naked lady

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I do wish we could see how they got cubed in those new pages.

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considering she got defeated by a menu prompt 'forced defeat' I assume the cubing was similiar.

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What, was the menu prompt "turn into a cube as a show of dominance"?

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Other languages and versions:

Japanese (RAW): https://e-hentai.org/g/2775994/b729db0f5b/ (uploaded by zrsers)
Chinese (Translation): https://e-hentai.org/g/3068853/080613b889/ (uploaded by iceiceice123)
Chinese (Translation): https://e-hentai.org/g/2776984/0fca9d31ee/ (uploaded by archen)
English (Translation, Incomplete): https://e-hentai.org/g/3068570/8d9a2fd421/ (uploaded by Kafka_tamura@12)
Korean (Translation): https://e-hentai.org/g/2862508/151718cf71/ (uploaded by raabbbbit)

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If I was doing it, I'd just reduce the graphics settings so she used fewer pixels. reducing her to a cube state.

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I have found some database style pages that are mostly text but they seem really good for this manga. Should i upload them seperately or should i just lump them into this one?

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