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a fun one.

I think this one would have been better with slightly less NTR. it would be better if Lauren was still fucking her husband while "pretending". the carwash for example should have ended with her going back in with him and fucking her husband.

The eye of loki as well. The joke of Ryan being completely obfuscated while reading all the books... Lauren should have accidently broke it at the end. maybe Lauren decides to fuck her husband right there. and because they think its just a normal table. they fuck up against it.. and break it. or maybe she gives him a BJ, and has him spray his come on her face.. which also gets on the eye. or maybe just covered in cum, she flings on onto it while getting dressed or something.

the classic invisibility downfall. if people can't see you, they don't know to avoid you either. Invisible in a street, or sidewalk, you will get hit.

even in porn/erotica, standard storytelling practices apply. a "protag" that is just a giant mary sue is hard to enjoy. so, yes, while the joke is, its clearly spelled out, and easy to break the enchantment. and ryan doesn't see it.. The story would actually be better, if the enchantment was broken. Lee would have to deal with the fallout. the women, would know what was done to them. the changes irreversible, and have to live with it. would lee flee? would some of the women go with him? would some go back to their husbands? which husbands would be pissed at lee, and which would give him a high 5 for "improving" their wives?

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