UOOOOOHHHH ToT

goated artist, i love the way he draws the girls' bodies

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Congratulations on your first translation done. The wording is very rough, though. Sentences like "Hey, sensei...Don't underestimate it that much, please..." (P. 6) just sound wrong. I'm fairly certain that every free-tier LLM translation app will give you better translation for these sentences.

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Other languages and versions:

Japanese (RAW, Digital): https://e-hentai.org/g/3512082/b21109387d/ (uploaded by raicoolloo)
Chinese (RAW, Digital): https://e-hentai.org/g/3512092/54c97d1301/ (uploaded by raicoolloo)
Text Cleaned (Translation, Digital): https://e-hentai.org/g/3555279/5de0c6ba2e/ (uploaded by dante41zzz)
Spanish (Translation, Digital): https://e-hentai.org/g/3554029/00cbb82541/ (uploaded by dante41zzz)
Korean (Translation, Digital): https://e-hentai.org/g/3512565/0d9cc630e3/ (uploaded by Srac)

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good art but the translation is very unnatural.

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The grammar's rough here and there. Weird phrasing and wrong tenses ("have sex for another 1 hour or so" -> "had sex for another hour or so") in a couple places. Then I checked the JP version and apparently the artist's japanese is pretty rough to start with. I don't know what to believe anymore.

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That's the issue with these chinese/korean artists lol, you need someone who can actually write in japanese to translate those

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