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It's decent. I'd have put more stuff like pg 30 31 in myself, from behind. Or from the front with her legs up, maybe mating press, and less BJ. But that's just my preferences.

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Good point, looking at it again there is a lot of BJ and could be more variety in angles/positions. Thanks for your thoughts.

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