This is bad in every single aspect

1 - no context

2 - bad facial expressions

3 - rushed plot

4 - arguably bad art

5 - edgy antagonist

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Ah, what a fine, healthy relationship that one is............still, she like the dick, so you can't blame her for being a slut :D

Good stuff, thanks for all the effort and sharing :)

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For me, it was an unnecessary story. First: It continues the story of a game (of 2022); if you haven't played it, you won't understand what it's about.
If you're going to publish this as a "doujin" version, at least make another one summarizing the game's story.
Second: Basically, it doesn't contribute anything.

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