Please put [English] on the title.

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This seems a lot like what incels think every girl who went to college is like. She probably needs like 4 more dudes at once to really sell it though.

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https://e-hentai.org/s/cc24287eaa/3705980-5
https://e-hentai.org/s/66af357ce0/3543688-5
Why did you turn いいよ？into "You okay? She's giving him permission to finish. Not checking his status. If you want to keep the inflection, just do "Why not?"

https://e-hentai.org/s/98a21a584f/3705980-7
https://e-hentai.org/s/3af12fad13/3543688-7
Too many mistakes here.

1. They went to her place.
2. "Do you even know his name?" This isn't in the raw. Don't create new lines.
3. She's not talking about him. It's a general statement like this. "I love letting otherwise eternal virgins fuck me like a beast, and dump their cum inside. They're so cute. Like monkeys."

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