i don't even play honkai and i can tell this is peak

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This shit is MTL
Eri, Erie when it's supposed to be Ely

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Other languages and versions:

Japanese (RAW, Digital): https://e-hentai.org/g/3184363/1916cffb89/ (uploaded by Shalba)
Japanese (RAW): https://e-hentai.org/g/3175230/46a849f2b1/ (uploaded by 981134)
Chinese (Translation, Digital, Uncensored): https://e-hentai.org/g/3197592/a8ec8241c4/ (uploaded by restday111)
Chinese (Translation, Digital): https://e-hentai.org/g/3190114/907d13ac89/ (uploaded by qq3870990)
Chinese (Translation): https://e-hentai.org/g/3183154/46a9713ecc/ (uploaded by quanbuzhineng)
Ukrainian (Translation, Digital, Uncensored): https://e-hentai.org/g/3279027/1ccc449af9/ (uploaded by HeartKnight)

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@chidotran
This might be because my English translation is based on the Indonesian version. My Japanese isn't that good, so I have to translate it from Indonesian, which I am fluent in, into English. Here's the Indonesian source: https://doujindesu.tv/elysian-erotica-3rd-pink-no-youseisan-to-sugosu-amaku-torokeru-yoru/

In the Indonesian version, Elysia is referred to as Erisia or Eri for short. I don't know that much about Elysia or Honkai Impact, as I have never played the game. This translation was made at the request of a friend. I was lacking information.

Just to clarify that this isn't MTL. I apologize for the confusion.

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@Udiiien
Regardless of which language you're fluent in, that doesn't change that the spelling and grammar errors on the very first page can give someone the impression of MTL.
Page 1:
"Eri, had your livestreaming finished" should be "Ely, has your livestream finished?"
"Hei" should be "Hey"
Page 18:
"I'm being forced to erect" should be "I'm being forced erect"
On top of what @chidotran said, 'Elysia' should only be shortened to 'Ely'. Not 'Eri', not 'Erie'

Saying that Elysia in pronounced as 'Erisia' and shortened to 'Ely' isn't news to anyone that knows the game. No one's expecting you to have thousands of hours in the game yourself, but at the very least do your basic research and homework so you know what it is you're actually translating. In the time it took for you to TL and typeset this, asking this friend of yours about basic nicknames would've barely taken more than a couple minutes, and only slightly longer if you asked him to proofread things, assuming he's fluent in English.
I've typeset stuff for stuff on other sites in the past, and some bit of scrutiny in your own work goes a long way.

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英雄呢😭😭有没有人汉化

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