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is this good or bad ending? bruh I cant even tell.

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我的评价是一坨，整活之后第四卷销量直接掉了一半以上。居然还有1w多，只能说掉得还不够

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I prefer the gyaru more honestly but oh well

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盡整些爛活

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畫個本子明明可以雙開，就是要搞現實倫理和男2，結果搞的劇情虎頭蛇尾，那作者前面就是在搞笑的，屬實拉完了

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我就寻思为啥没找到第四卷，原来是我屏蔽了ntr来着

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什么垃圾剧情

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真的烂活，没那能力还硬整
而且说实话，这话一出来，上一话结尾穿越就意义不明，男主穿越后的女主一起的经历全被替换成黄毛了，就剩个摔坏了舍不得扔的杯子给女主还想不起来怎么来的，最后那段打炮应该也是男主幻想的（根据P52和P71的时钟指针位置基本没变判断），那你这直接上话结尾换成这话的2年后女主黄毛结婚不就行了，多出一话塞点可有可无的东西多收割粉丝钱？搁这里提纯呢？
这真就该完在第3话，后两话纯属满足自己没有实力的创作欲顺带割粉丝韭菜
顺带一提这人前几天还宣布要出官中了，预计3月25配信，不知道有多少抖M会在已知结局是一坨的情况下去买

Last edited on 01 March 2026, 15:44.

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不是，這完全符合標題啊，屬於被牛走最後又牛回來......

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有创作欲但是没本事是这样的，和柿本广大一个样，没有编辑管着直接拉一坨大的。只能说搞创作确实不容易。绝命毒师这种奇迹可遇不可求。这些人创作欲一上来根本刹不住，到最后就是中二少年写轻小说，傻逼飞天了。

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如果你只看到第三话，那是一个不错的故事，如果你看了第四话，那么就是一坨屎，如果你强忍住接着看第五话，你会发现这就是糖果包装的💩

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我记得这作者还嚣张得喷读者来着? 看来还是让它尝到甜头了.继续死吧!

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女ギャル上司と不倫する話

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日本人这么喜欢被用过的东西吗？还要包装成所谓的生活终极答案

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到底在几把写什么东西，两边都得罪完了

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진짜 개거지 같은 결말이네. 괜히 이상한 짓 해서 이게 뭐임. 결말도 이도저도 아닌 이상한 결말이고. 다음에는 그냥 노선 확실하게 정해서 하던가 해라.

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我懂了 作者的目的是讓男主和黃毛從早期就開始認識後成好兄弟，主動讓妹給黃毛成就深厚兄弟情誼，第5話就是部gay漫

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It's a continued cheating ending.
Yes, the FMC married ger boyfriend but still keeps having an affair with the MC.

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It's a "we might keep this going, rather break things off" ending, now it is up to the reader to decide if that's good, for you or not.

By magically inserting himself in Reika's past more strongly, he made a huge impression on her by making her fall in love with him despite Namba still going on to become her boyfriend in college later on, after his mind returns to the present time Reika goes on marry Namba. It is then shown this sudden trip to the past wasn't a delusion after all, Reika can't remember how she got that silly mug but she still kept it to this day, meaning somehow the past was altered thus Reika is completely receptive to his advances when a perfect opportunity arrives with their respective spouses sleeping soundly, Reika doesn't feel bad at all for cheating on Namba, meaning they will likely be a multual cheating couple from now on.

----

So yeah, the theme of this series is having an affair all the way, the past truly changing to a point where Reika was married with him instead would be too convenient, I guess.

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If you have any questions, it's recommended to discuss them on Twitter and in the author's post.

如果有任何疑问，建议到推特上和作者帖子下说

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老奶奶钻被窝，我爷整笑了，什么狗屎剧情

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何意味，作者是覺得他筆下的男二是本作最大賣點嗎

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Bro, the author wants to tell us the significance of this episode is the MC helps the Second Male Lead and Second Female Lead' love story by giving his own memories of the Second Female Lead to the Second Male Lead lead to Mc met SML in college and achieve a brotherhood between the men. This is a gay manga.

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这人之前中日英各种语言回复，态度看似诚恳——原来是诚恳的邀请继续看他这一坨

不出意外的评论区继续爆炸，真心实意夸他的日本人留言也没几个，不然也不会想看if线什么的，只能说BYD这次再怎么装模作样的回复也没用了

Last edited on 02 March 2026, 10:41.

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我只能说恭喜加入我的永久黑名单，太变态了这剧情

忍不了，回来多骂两句，我说这个系列要封神只需要结局搞大两个骚鸡肚子你作者就能开法拉利，为什么就搞不懂，然后我最近追的买的连载本子画师剧情都在乱搞，吃屎了一样

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다시 생각해도 빡쳐서 오게 되네. 결국 금태양이랑 가는 게 순애라는 개좆같은 논리로 하는 게 진짜 대단하다. 그냥 평범하게 가던가 처음부터 ntr을 하던가 하지 대단하다 작가야. 뭐든 방향성만 확실하게 해서 갔어도 좋았을 그림 실력으로 이 정도로 말아 먹는 것도 쉬운 게 아닌데.

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劇情都演成這樣了有沒有混混凌辱篇的IF可以看阿，我對這還比較有興趣

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纯正神人作者

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Well, Japanese authors never beat the allegations. Asking a Japanese author not to fumble is like asking a cat to bark, it’s just unnatural for them.

I have no idea what the author was trying to do or tell with this work, but it’s just a failure. People just wanted a reversed netorare that leads into a harem. That’s it. Adding random netorare out of nowhere, why? It didn’t even work in volume 4, so why try again? And what is this shitty ending? The question I keep asking myself is: what were the first three chapters even for? (I know the answer, absolutely nothing.) He had one job, and he couldn’t even do that.

I’m not even angry… just tired of these authors thinking they’re something they’re not. Mixing genres takes skill, and mixing netorare with other genres takes more than skill. And this author clearly doesn’t have that talent

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Why is it that, whenever a hentai artist feels that they can milk their work, they always end up ruining it by extending it with retarded and non-sensical plot twists? Smh...

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Author really be retard maxxing out there.

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原作三话就已经完结了，这个同人画的两话真的纯纯的一坨啊 🖕🏻不要碰瓷原作🖕🏻🖕🏻

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What the FUCK did I just read?

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a piece of shit XD

a piece of shit XD

a piece of shit XD

a piece of shit XD

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可以的可以的，牛逼牛逼，会写你就他妈多写点，妈的，这剧情真的是，唉

除了两日本人夸了他的作品，期待if线之外，剩下的全是骂的。

而且最恶心的是最后的那一场做爱还是幻想，……你他妈真的是唉

一部好作品，要么牛到最后，要么纯到最后，你妈逼牛又不牛，纯又不纯，这男二加进来不纯纯机械降神吗？那穿越戏码又有何意义？甚至是幻想……，还给人家男二来了个纯情人设，唉，一手好牌打的稀烂，这些作者真的是，这个完结了，接下来就看文学少女那部怎么给我完结了。

Last edited on 02 March 2026, 02:00.

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别看奥别看，这作品第三部就已经完结了四和五都是史属于是牛了别人但又被别人牛回去了

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前三部卖的挺好，出的也勤快。天胡开局4 5能把自己玩死的人不多了。

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现在一旦成长篇大概率都会这样，作者突然多了小心思，那个辣妹去宅男家看漫画的本子也是

Base +4, henta1lover0 +10

最后那个被冰块融化的声音惊醒的分镜
其实男主最后没和上司死灰复燃吧
最后的做爱都是想象中的

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接着前三部的剧情画后宫不是挺好的嘛，作者就非得整个活，结果搞的结局不上不下我也是服了。

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这是狗屎吗？请问这是狗屎吗？
我真是没法理解这个狗杂种的创作意图。
穿越回去的目的难道不是改变既有的悲剧吗？
结果居然能整出女主当着男主面差点被强奸的顶级烂活，还有，这个来救场的黄毛又是何意味啊？凸显出男主的废物吗？
那你干脆让黄毛当男主好了，可是黄毛同样也被男主牛了。
既然如此，我建议再画一个女主被混混干成肉便器的if线，这样我代入混混还能爽一点。
还有最后的合家欢包饺子结局，这是人类能想出来的操作？
最后一幕的冰块融化更是顶级中的顶级。
嘲讽男主、嘲讽读者，告诉他们这一切其实只是个虚无的幻想？现实里的女主嫁给了男主？

Base +6, SL-Yu +9, Orion07 -8

所以这穿越是何意味？加这个穿越是想表达什么？不会是为了帮那个玩到忘了自己女友的黄毛洗白吧？

Last edited on 05 March 2026, 01:38.

Base +6

Lowkey this story is a good example of why authors need an editor to reign in their retardation.

@isoknight

That's not even what happens. Everything from page 53 onwards until the end where the MC snaps back and notices the ice only happens in his head - it doesn't actually take place. He still wants to fuck his boss he just can't do anything about it anymore because he "gave up on her" after the revelation that the ex-boyfriend is better suited to taking care of her in the "time travel" sequence.

Last edited on 09 March 2026, 15:09.

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I'll just pretend Part 4 and 5 never happened

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This is just like Sex Closet (Misaoka) #3 ending again.

Last edited on 19 March 2026, 11:22.

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1-5 + New Artwork
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