Ok, I just read the thing, this is really bad translation. Just read my version from 2019 on ****hitomi . la*** this one is terrible.
Page 7 "Yesterday's cunnilingus is starting to make me sick" This makes no sense and is badly translated.

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Gagak_Ireng is not a translator. All their works are rewrites and some of them are redrawn to show pregnancy when the original work doesn't have it. If you see any of the stuff they worked on with a random panel of sperm going inside an ovum, it's almost always a redraw added in for some impregnation fetish to match the rewrite. Also, calling it a 'redraw' is generous considering those panels are taken from other works.

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