Hi guys. Noticed that this gem didn't have an english version and so my friend and I made one. Commissions are also open if anyone wants translation. (we can only do korean mangas/manhwas). More details are in the last page.

There's no English version on here because this was licensed (and translated) by F**ku in uncensored form years ago. So this gallery is going to have roughly the lifespan of a fruit fly before it gets nuked.

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You also have to work on your English skills first. You have lots of grammar errors and you've chosen words in a way nobody would talk like that in English. I can clearly tell that you have a limited vocabulary.

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@RapidBlast I don't see any issue with the English used at all. Ironically your sentence describing their English stumbles as well. I only spotted one typo and it was a comma during ellipses on p3. No other grammar errors unless you're being pedantic about ellipses followed by exclamation marks. In a site overrun wih dogwater AI translations a human translation is a godsend. You really should point out specific examples to make your criticisms constructive. "Do better" comes off as being unappreciative of the TL's work.

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> I don't see any issue with the English used at all.

p1
dissapointed -> disappointed

are we perhaps... wasted? -> what does this even mean? That's not English that makes sense for this context.

p2
You two got hit by a truck, this is the video footage -> comma splice

...As you can see it was a gruesome accident..., -> extra comma you mentioned earlier, also the starting ellipsis should really be moved to after "it" to split the clauses, but since these are separate bubbles, its okay

p3
giving you a choice is to OP -> too

yuusha -> more of a TL thing, but just translate this to hero. We have a 1:1 English words, so there's 0 reason for this except to sound more weeb

you are like a ; you are next -> minor nitpick, but should be "you're" as "you are" is rarely used in spoken English

p4
Oh sorry you got succubus. -> missing punctuation, my recommendation is "Oh! Sorry, you got succubus."

p5
there is -> there's, contraction nitpick, but I'm trying to add to RapidBlast's point of "nobody would talk that way"

cooling off -> I've never heard of this before, so the TL note is fine, but have you considered the much more common phrase "rerolling"? I don't have the JP, so I can't confirm anything, but you'd save yourself a lot of trouble with a translation that gets the meaning across without skipping a beat.

p7
ambushing someone isn't very yuusha-like -> are we considering orcs as people? someone should be "monsters," or the sentence should be restructured: "performing ambushes isn't very hero-like"

It's been a few months... ...And we've... ;
I was nervous... ...But I grew to depend on...
For these 2 sets of bubbles, you're missing a comma or an ellipsis between clauses. Again, these are OK because of the split speech bubbles, but it's a bad habit, so I'm pointing it out now.

I'm sorry about that sir -> missing period

p10
throbbing feeling down there -> down here, it's her own body (and from her perspective), so she wouldn't use "there"

<3 -> minor nitpick, but you really couldn't find a font with a heart or just draw a heart?

No this is wrong! -> missing punctuation after "No." When dealing with interjections, you should usually have a comma or exclamation point. "No! This is wrong!"

p13
Kikuchi's dick -> missing punctuation

p14
You're taking me in so deep -> missing punctuation

p15
Yeah like that... -> same thing about interjections I said earlier, "Yeah, like that..."

p17
I'm going to put -> I'm gonna, not wrong but not as natural

p18
The fact that Yuta's inside me, makes me happy -> improper comma usage, also missing ending punctuation

Will stop here, 10+ pages of notes should be good enough.

Yes, I'm being pedantic with punctuation and contractions, but when there are so many of these mistakes, it certainly doesn't read smoothly in English. So here's your constructive criticism post that isn't just "do better."

Last edited on 10 March 2026, 18:11.

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> cooling off -> I've never heard of this before, so the TL note is fine, but have you considered the much more common phrase "rerolling"? I don't have the JP, so I can't confirm anything, but you'd save yourself a lot of trouble with a translation that gets the meaning across without skipping a beat.

Raw says actually does say cooling off
あクーリングオフ不可なので
Though I'd probably translate it something like "There's a cooldown (or cooling off (period)) so that's not possible". Also, that TN note isn't based on anything from the raw but...

Rereading the uploader comment
> we can only do korean mangas/manhwas
I checked the korean translation and, yep, random TN note on p5. So I assume this translation is not based on the raw but the korean translation. Which explains the random inaccuracies.

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Very cute manga. I hope the English corrections are made. Keep up with the good work, uploaders and proofreaders!

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Fakku apparently did an English version 3 years ago. I vaguely recalled it and had to check. But hey, more TL practice, I suppose.

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I'm actually really glad this turned out good for both of them. There's a small amount of stress imagining her going so long without clearly needed sustenance. Then her ending up with a partner who can have a symbiotic relationship with her, as well as be someone she really loves, makes it all worth that.

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