Hello hello!
Welcome back if you're coming back, or welcome around otherwise!
This is my second go at doing MTL, and hopefully I've made some improvements this time around! I tried my hand at redrawing a little, and it didn't turn out too shabby, I'd say! But there are still some parts where I couldn't quite get it nailed down and felt it was best left as is.
As with my last translation, please let me know if you have any notes if ya read through it! I'm excited to hear from you all again, even the negative comments!
Thanks so much for you time!

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That was a genuinely decent translation job. Honestly, aside from some overly interpreted sound effects (e.g. twitches ビクン or throbs ドクン interpreted as heartbeats or squirts) there were no dialogue moments that gave me pause. Carefully handled MTL might not be all bad yet.

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@TragicSolitude First, thanks for your honesty regarding MTL use for this work. Relative to other users misguided attempts, I see that you put some effort into trying to have the dialogue make sense, and the redrawing is decent as well for the most part. I caught a couple minor typos, but nothing egregious.

If you want to keep translating these works from Bekobeko, I would suggest these two next:

https://e-hentai.org/g/3289364/b3f243f071/ - it had two previous MTL attempts, but I think you could at least do the work some justice, and it is highly unlikely to get a proper commission since it has already been MTLed twice with subpar quality.

https://e-hentai.org/g/3585259/dec12ee0ec/ - this was their last work before going off the grid (possibly delisted for AI use?) in any case, both this and the gyaru work above would be nice to see translated with your superior attempt compared to other MTL. Keep at it and you will continue to improve!

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MTL can absolutely be a good and useful tool, but it (and raw AI output in general) keeps being spammed out by people who put in no effort and do not attempt to use it _as_ a tool. The issue is it's best used by people who already have the skill in question, or those who truly give a shit. Both are rare.

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His style is kinda weird, you can really tell it's traced over 3D and I'm not a big fan

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@Akikaze Otome: Thank you for the kind words! That is my basically my mango (other than to blow up), to prove! That if people just gave MTL some effort, it is actually acceptable! Thanks for the notes on the sfx though! I'll have to be more careful next time, but these are good little additions to keep with my guide! If I recall, I believe those are some that my guide were pretty vague on and left me a bit lost on some panels. So those make more sense!

@Hentai4466: Thanks for the positive marks, especially about the redrawing! I know it's nothing superb, but it's certainly where I'm most shakey! I can't say I'll get to an even moderate scanlator level of redrawing, but hopefully I can at least keep it serviceable! Please feel free to point out where you see typos though! While I do my own QC, sometimes it is hard to step all the way back on your own work hahah.
I'll probably do their newest one next (as that was partly my plan) but I hope they didn't just poof! While their art is debatable, I do like their scenes and dialogue. It hits a very nice sweet spot, imo!

@Lao Shan Long: These are my thoughts as well. I understand how MTL has come to be so divisive from so many pump and dumps, but we also have to contend with the fact that not everything CAN get translated by actual translators. So while we can make arguments about my level of Japanese comprehension, I still want to make my absolute best efforts where I notice unloved niches.

@Namesnotimportant: I can understand your point on his art style. It's rather odd, even at the best of times, but the genre is so quiet I've come to accept what I can get hahah.

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