Hopefully this will get a proper translation someday instead of this

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MTL??? ?????

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MTL on the Chinese translation as well it seems. The least you could do is translate from the raw Japanese...

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Just being held tightly by me like this > Just being held like this
Things like this... > No way...
Dare you say you don't? > That's not the case?

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become so sensitive... it's here. > become so sensitive...
I went through some things > there were... various things, but...
Originally > Strictly speaking
But, I think... > Well, I guess...
What did you say... > What...!?
I know very well...I do... > Well...
Do you remember? The candle I gave you. > Do you remember the candle I gave you?
I remember that... > That's right...

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Rarely... > What a shame...

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It's for sleeping peacefully once lit > Candles for a good night's sleep
Candles... > Even though it's burning...
No... > I...
No > I mustn't!

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Since that's the case, I'll > At this point...
Have to do this... > this is my only option...
This is also a part of me... > To think this is a part of me...
Chinese SFX at the bottom (呼) > Hu
Original Japanese SFX フ > Fu

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Aah! > Eek!? (More specifically: Kyahi!?)
Switch the boxes for : "Just now...that tingling sensation..." and "Wh-...what...?"
I must... > I...
I need to confirm it properly... > I need to check...
Slowly lifting the fabric of the clothes... > Slowly lift the fabric of the clothes...

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That smooth feeling on the silk... > The smooth, silky feel of the fabric...
Stimulating every nerve on my nipples... > Stimulating every nerve in my nipples...
Okay... > It...
So good... > It feels so good...

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I... > Amazing!

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Then...Then what else is there...? > Th...there's still something else...?
Leaving...? > Left...?

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Haaah... > Not really a good way to translate よいしょっと. "Heave-ho" feels a bit odd. Personally I'd put something like "Hup..."
You should take care of yourself. > Take care of yourself.
Mmm. > I will.
Mmm. > Ok. (These 2 are tricky because うん is just a general agreement)
...So then > ...Well then
I've already said goodbye to you all, so I'll be heading off now. > Now that we've said our goodbyes, I'll be heading off now.

Just a few pages of corrections. I'd be here forever if were to do the whole thing.

Last edited on 22 March 2026, 04:15.

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did you translate it by yourself?

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竟然是汉化本转英语翻译

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