Typesetting looks awful even from the thumbnails.

Base +6, IngmarS +8, rhyme0 +6, randalthor20001 +5, Vinatea +19, Kraftz +6, PKMNSFW +6

Why was the big panel on page 16 just left fully untranslated?

Base +6, randalthor20001 +5, Vinatea +19, Kraftz +6, PKMNSFW +6

probs because it's just AI slop translation

Base +6, IngmarS +8, rhyme0 +6, alehebras +2, randalthor20001 +5, biscardone +8, neptus36 +6, Vinatea +19, Kraftz +6, catie001 +6, PKMNSFW +6

This is clearly an AI translation. It's not the worst one I've seen, but it could definitely be better.

Base +18, IngmarS +8, rhyme0 -6, tobeunforgiven2 +29, Sylvrwolflol +8, biscardone +8, Vinatea +19, Kraftz +6, PKMNSFW +6, thebeginingoftheend +7

I'd like to see improvements in the typesetting.
The AI translation is decent now with natural sounding language even though it feels watered down and without much personality.
The typesetting is a lot more sloppy with nearly every bit of text escaping the text bubbles. You don't see that much with human typesetting.

Base +6, Chygrynsky -7, biscardone -8, nαmεlεss -8

It sounds natural... except for all the parts that can't stay consistent in referring to characters. Stutters, っ, and a few other quirks become nonsense because slop machine doesn't understand what it's doing.

EDIT: The fact that it sounds so natural is also masking the less obvious errors, as the slop machine is very confident regardless of whether it's correct or wrong.

Last edited on 20 March 2026, 15:12.

Base +6, biscardone +8, neptus36 +6, Kraftz +6, PKMNSFW +6

Was it a 'bad' end? ALso, like...

So, I'm having trouble getting how the set-up works, exactly? Was it all a game of the high-ranking one, did she infiltrate where he was recovered from?

Was it a 'bad' end? ALso, like...

So, I'm having trouble getting how the set-up works, exactly? Was it all a game of the high-ranking one, did she infiltrate where he was recovered from?

Was it a 'bad' end? ALso, like...

So, I'm having trouble getting how the set-up works, exactly? Was it all a game of the high-ranking one, did she infiltrate where he was recovered from?

Base +6, biscardone -8

Really weird setup. Kinda just feels like nothing happened...? Maybe the twist could've had a bit more impact if the high-rank succubus weren't near identical to her human form...

Also you've been pumping out your ai stuff for a year now, you should know by now to put [MTL] in the title. You're making the site worse for people who want to steer clear.

Base +6, biscardone +8, neptus36 +6, Kraftz +6, ensane +9