https://www.dmm.co.jp/dc/doujin/-/detail/=/cid=d_523258/

这色的不行的画风跟恶意十足的分镜太有特色了，一眼就是把你的全部夺走之前的作者，直接给到一个夯

Base +5

instant karma for ntr man

Base +6, mys_fapper +6, Roludo +6, Managarmr719 +6, your_name +6

If you're gonna do MTL, please proofread first before uploading
At least make the distinction gender of the characters right

Base +18, Badat +12, mrd3vil +7

I'm usually not bothered by MTL, but going to the trouble of redrawing, using somewhat adequate fonts but not reading a single translated sentence for obvious fixes?... oof...

Anyway, it's refreshing that the "slutty" girl turned out to be the nice one. :)

Base +5, Xafnir +6

I like the twist in the latter half. But the plot overall still feels stupid.

Base +7, Managarmr719 +6

Raw: https://e-hentai.org/g/3556691/2c782aef6a/

Base +15

@CrawlerOfSin You think this is the first time anyone tells this fuckface that? He just ignores every piece of advice and ruins manga. He needs to be killed.

Base +6, mapokl -18, clawing +7