commission work? from a glance at this upload, you are not at that level yet. do better cleaning/typesetting/editing first. and it's important to prove that you don't use any MTL at all. also, improve your english. only then you can talk about accepting commission. there are examples of good work in this very site. use them as a reference.
sorry if it comes out as being harsh. it's not my intention. thanks for the hard work!