I'm just not too sure about this translation, I'm sad to say. It seems somewhat accurate, but at the same time, very wrong at points.
@tralphaz6476: I'm not one of those people although I do think there are certain things that aren't translatable. I'm actually wondering if I should translate this chapter myself because of the problems that I perceive. I guess it'd be better than just sitting around complaining (but I have other things to work on as well. orz What shall I do?).
@Shin, sometimes you just have to make the best with what you can get. There are those who say you can't really translate one language into another anyway, but that discussion is for a diffeent day.