A revenge NTR story? In this year? Sure why not! But after finishing it... I mean it's alright.
It does some things right but it also does lots of things terribly wrong. For all the good stuff the guy ends up with four(?) girls in his harem and having a vidya for himself, he gets back his club and no one messes up with him anymore. It does have a nice ending overall it feels good man. However... it does some bad things on it's way that massively detract it from being such an enjoyable revenge/harem story. I'll start by saying that all developments are just convenient asspulls: The guy can tame the girls and automatically they spread their legs, he fucks them to dominate them so you can't really say they actually love him they are just tamed by the convenient power up. Kinda fucked up in restrospective. Everything goes his way one way or two because of plot armor so it's not very satisfying to see him conquering all the girls and defeating the NTR man because it just feels cheap not really earned.
Speaking of NTR man, I kinda liked his background story. He got a shit life and was doing just doing bad shit because he believed it was the easiest way to win at life. Meeting and becoming MC's bro ended up breaking him until he turned completely evil. I was kind of expecting a redemption arc (Yes, even after all the shit he did) because... the story kinda leads you to think that but at the end it goes nowhere, NTR man is defeated and he is eventually punished.
The heroines are forgettable nothing stands out. As soon they are dicked all of them turn exactly the same just a bunch of pastel colored sluts. I kinda liked most the rich girl because she has the most extensive development (Not by much compared to others) but turns out that even tamed this girl will fuck other guys so never mind that! Hell even the author was surprised by the backlash from that scene he decided turning the other guy into her boyfriend I guess that when shit like this happens and you were already working on the last part just fuck it. I think the whole reason why the last girl was added was to give our MC an actual girl that loves him unlike these sluts shame she only exists in VR so I am inclined to believe that's the real NTR here bros.
everything that happened past page 266 that is. im not a prude but that rat didnt have to get waifu beamed. bringing it back as-is would have been fine. sometimes less is more
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