Completed April 3, 2026
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My second TL! I hope you guys enjoy this one too.
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I just spot checked a couple pages and even I can tell some of the TL is off.

bottom left of page 19 she says she can't hold back her emotions nothing about "not being able to figure out"

page 20 top left you've taken it too literally どうかしてる is an expression phrase meaning crazy / somethings off and not literally how should I act

page 21 he talks about becoming one and you have changed it to possession.

page 22 she's saying how she couldn't let the other people see her like this not that he shouldn't let others be like this.

dunno if this is a rushing it issue or just not quite there but some of these are more subtle and some of this is just not that hard.

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Thanks for the translation! Are you planning on doing the Elegg one too?

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@crusher330
Thanks for the feedback! I took a lot of liberties here and there, but it looks like I may have gone too far. And yes, absolutely: my Japanese just isn't there quite yet (I avoided using MTL assistance here since I really wanted to practice my reading). I'll be sure to be a bit more careful and consult people who speak/read better than I do for my next one :)

@GenerationKamenRider
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Yes, Yunagi Amane's Elegg book is what I'm working on next :)

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