Sabine finds a very enjoyable use for the hypnotic pendant she brought from her last mission. What was supposed to be a quick infiltration turns into something far more pleasurable.
Good to see that you improved blowjob scenes. They feel more sexy now.
I've seen a image out of order (nº33), but it's completely manageable. This work is far better than your previous group scene (Yoruichi). I mean, you're improving group scenes. I think it's pretty good because group scenes are harder to make.
There's a sequence from your work that feels off: titjob sequence (from 38 to 43). These images feel completely out of place. Don't fit well in the sequence.
The blurred makeup is interesting. You should develop more and put these effects in the last blowjob scenes (for instance nº 54,63 or 19) to give an impression that the makeup is being blurred little by little.
Cum sequence is a little messy too. Guys are cumming before starting penetrating (55,56,57). I don't know if it's your style. Some creators exaggerate cum scenes.
Last thing: facial expressions are good. Neither excellent, nor messy. You could use your Nami work as reference. From past works of yours, I believe it was one of the best in terms of facial expressions. Nami was really excited. She was definitely enjoying herself. This kind of impression is amazing from a viewer's perspective. I mean, Sabine doesn't give the impression that she is getting excited or enjoying the sex. Not completely. It's more like an ordinary situation. A good sex, not an extraordinary one. Maybe It was your intention (?).
Very good points! Thanks! Agree, titjob sequence would work much better early in the story, before 2 more officers are joining the action. Cum sequence is definitely misplaced, I've overlooked that, thanks for spotting! Blurred makeup - totally, very interesting find.
Thanks again for your involvement! I will post a new story gallery very soon. It will be interesting to know what you think!