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maybe 1 panel of actual sex. several of blowjobs. mostly its just implied and skipping the sex to focus on the mind control and body changes.

also, why race swap doom? doom is not black

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This is true to the comics at least: Wether Scarlet Witch is completely omnipotent or completely useless is entirely dependant on the needs of the plot.

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@pureyang How is Doom black here? You can literally compare his skin tone to Storm's in page 21&22.

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> How is Doom black here? You can literally compare his skin tone to Storm's in page 21&22.
@Nystic

look at p36 and tell me they didn't turn doom black here. Go look up canon doom and see how pasty white he is.

"Black" refers to several different shades of brown, not literal blackness. Just like "white" refers to various shades of pink and beige. Ororo is indeed a much deeper shade of black than doom in p21. But this author absolutely race swapped doom.

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@pureyang
Doom is canonically romani, an ethnic group originating in Northern India, some of whom are brown. Different artists have interpreted him differently over the years, some pastier than others

@pureyang
same thing with scarlet witch

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The whole point of this comic is the mind control, bimbofication and pin up type full display of the girls. That's the appeal, that's the porn. not active sex. I don't know why people always only want to see sex in everything like there aren't other erotic expressions that can be done in porn. That being said, I'm really hoping when he eventually returns to this comic to finish, we see Rogue and Invisible woman. Hot damn that would be great.

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Hoping Doom gets a taste of his own medicine in the end.

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