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Is this MTL? The pronouns are all over the place.

p1: "When I and I were newlyweds", should be something like "when HE and I were newlyweds", "when we were newlyweds", etc.
p2: "I'm sorry, earlier when I leave tomorrow, I'm tired", I presume this was meant to be "Sorry, I'm tired, I leave early tomorrow"'
p6: "She still sucks the milk from my breasts hard", wrong pronoun, son is male, should be "HE still sucks the milk from my breasts hard"
p8: "Can I keep it a secret?" he's blackmailing, this is not an interrogation, he should say "I can keep it a secret"
p9: "It shows that I was breastfeeding", he is not in the video, it should be "It shows that YOU WERE breastfeeding"
p14: "I really turned into a perverted bitch", this appears to be the brother-in-law, so it should say "YOU really turned into a perverted bitch"

Base +4, Slarka +11

I think it’s an *English is their fifth language* translation. Even the MTL stuff is more coherent than this.

Base +6, Slarka +11, k_2553472 +6

page2
"...not as enthusiastic as he used to be. "
page14
"...perverted bitch..."

Be confident, you are a perverted bitch?

Base +8

Other languages and versions:

Korean (RAW): https://e-hentai.org/g/3124003/37ea8f7528/ (uploaded by Sam@96)

Base +51