Translated using Machine Translation Tools found online.

Used the Chinese Translation of Mashiniki Jigoku ~Tettei Ryoujoku Hakai~ ( which can be found here https://e-hentai.org/g/1666721/524ee0a248/ ) for reference.

go fuck and die mtl/ai loser.

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This seems more like mind break then mind control.

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Mistake #1: Making a translation of a translation. It makes it much easier to mess things up. Translations should be done from the original language into the language you want it to be in at the end.
Mistake #2: Not proofreading it (as shown by the Chinese text still present in numerous places). If it's that you couldn't because English isn't your first language (like so many of the MTL uploaders), then...
Mistake #3: Translating it into a language you don't know and therefore having no idea if the output is accurate at all. Knowing the original language (Japanese) is highly recommended too, but not knowing what was being said before or after the translation is done is asinine.

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