I hope everyone enjoys this.
If anyone finds any of my mistakes please point them out in the comments and I'll try and address them.

Is this also MTL? It's worse than that one.

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Other languages and versions:

Japanese (RAW, Digital): https://e-hentai.org/g/3896771/d82eb65f29/ (uploaded by quanlix)
English (Translation): https://e-hentai.org/g/3897645/eb11597c32/ (uploaded by Owlfocus)

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@dogeboy sorry you feel that way. The rating for this one is much better and there are fewer negative comments about it, which makes me happy at least. If there's anything specific you have a problem with or think should be changed I'd definitely be willing to look at it and make changes if I feel it's necessary. If you check my other translations I'm very amenable to constructive criticism.

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@Engrish-Transrations I think how "modern" and over the top the language can be on some pages is the only complaint I have. Things like "Jesus butt fucking Christ", "doomscrolling", and "tube steak" can put people off, but personally I think you did a good job. I'd rather see a single one of your translations than 50 low effort MTL works.

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@ronnoc thanks for the feedback! I felt like earlier translations of mine read a little stiff so I thought I would try to make this one feel a bit more natural by adding some modern vernacular. I've read a couple of good translations that I though leveraged that really effectivly but my writing chops may just not be up to that at this point. I can definitely see how not using those terms will give it a more timeless feel which I think is nice.
Anyway I really appreciate you taking the time to type out thoughts and I'll try to be better in the future.

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