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I found a mistake.

All of it.

Base +7, zerpientez +10

Could use a more readable font and there are some typos here and there. Other than that? A lot more refined than the usual copy/paste MTL you see around here, but the wording still feels a little stiff. A good majority of the text is internal monologue, but it doesn't read like it. Iron that out and you'd probably silence the mouth breathers here. Hah who am I kidding, they'd find something else to complain about. Also ditch the watermark on every single page. Tacky as hell.

Base +15, Foojack100 -21, mizuki_guren +9

Other languages and versions:

Japanese (RAW): https://e-hentai.org/g/3850546/2e8b6b0422/ (uploaded by letista)
Thai (Translation): https://e-hentai.org/g/3910795/4e2edddd26/ (uploaded by C1135)
Korean (Translation): https://e-hentai.org/g/3844013/6c6016daa9/ (uploaded by AirKim)

Base +51