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I hope you enjoy the update❤️

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Very good!

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Thank you, peao20. Glad you enjoyed it. 😊

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Man this is really good , definitely need more!You can try a game called TGP Recollared you’ll get a lot of inspiration, there are few things you can improve on like texture of cum, outlines and well body proportions( need them BIG). Hope to see you around.

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Thanks, Luffy98765_123 ❤️

Yeah, i'm working on chapter 3 & 4 and will release them very soon. I will definitely check that game because I really need ideas for the next chapters so thanks for that❤️

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Absolutely delightful: beautiful graphics, interesting dialogue, and well-rounded characters.
Congratulations, Azoz4122, great work!
I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapters.

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Aww, thanks , RkR ❤️

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That looks more like an Orc then a goblin

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Goblins, by definition, are little. This is a full size man that's green. He looks much more like a clean orc, than anything else.

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The Goat is Watching,@ You are right, I created this character based on an anime charactar called Rigurd (from the anime "that time i got reincarnated as a slime") I thought he was a goblin but in the anime he evoloved into a Hobgoblin which explains why he looks bigger than a usual goblin. But yeah i think making him an orc would make sense since his appearance might confuse a lot of people😂. I will make the change in next update

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Why wouldn't she just kill him the moment he's asleep?

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Good question, W1slicer, I did actually wanted her to choke him while he was sleeping on page 18, but then I realized she's just not as strong as he is therefore killing him is not an option. If she tried to choke him he might just wake up and tell her to stop it and goes back to sleeping 😂

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This is really good, you are fleshing out the story very good and your pics are really set up good. I would suggest maybe she becomes pregnant and a result of that as her pregnancy progresses she herself turns into a goblin. Afterwards she enjoys being a goblin and maybe even finish it out with a pic of them together with multiple kids in the end showing up to the former parents house telling them they are now grandparents.

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Loving it! keep this series going!!

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@wrench08, Thank you so much❤️ I actually first planned to make her become pregnant in chapter 4 but i decided to make it happen in chapter 5 or 6. In chapter 7 and 8 she become a mother and starts acting like a wife but don't worry im gonna try my best to make the transformation of her personality more realistic and slow😊

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We should have more orcs and goblins doing this. If they don't have females, I would assume having a shaman would make a goblin tribe way more dangerous because of increasing the breeding stock.

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I hope his personality doesn't change and he escapes

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Hey!
Amazing stuff, I really love the art and the dynamic between the characters!
Can't wait to see where this is going.

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Thanks SAXtrad! Coming from you that means a lot ❤️

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Somehow I don't trust the blonde girl.

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@Azoz4122 You don't have to be as strong as someone else to choke them to death. lol

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@The Goat is Watching Yeah i can't disagree with that... especially after watching invincible vs conquest 😂

@Senkoau Me too i feel like she's hiding something😳!! I'm still not sure what to do with her yet, she is a very interesting charactar though. I might do a side story to show how she was captured and turned into a woman.

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Brochacho so much potential, can't wait to new chapter, amazing work

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