I hope you are able to enjoy this absolute banger from がりょ~ (Garyo)! He's one of my favorite (criminally underrated) artists and has way too little content so I took it upon myself to translate his section of the MAO goat tickling anthology 2. I don't really have enough time to translate all 64 pages unfortunately.
This is actually my first time translating and typesetting manga and neither English nor Japanese are my native languages, so it's probably not perfect. I did put quite a bit of effort into it regardless and i think the translation is at least servicable.
Your typesetting is pretty good, especially for someone just starting out (I've definitely seen worse from beginners). Good font choice across the board, and it's readable. Any suggestions would be nitpicks, really. Hope you try your hand at another work! ദ്ദി(˵ •̀ ᴗ - ˵ ) ✧