short comics from this fic

The art for this gallery is good. The premise of a gender bent Sasuke and Naruto being on a team with her and Hinata and the three developing a relationship sounds interesting, but the execution of the fanfic seems to be a mess.

Link to the fanfic: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8898479/1/Uchiha-Heiress-Remix
Various related art that mostly isn't in this gallery: https://www.deviantart.com/jgresidenevil/favourites/55753192/uchiha-heiress-remix-related

Below is a short summary of the first couple chapters and what I bothered to skim through or looked up from the other art commissioned by the fanfic author not from AlineSM.

It starts right after the incident with Mizuki, Naruto already has access to Wind Chakra, specifically "Wind Style: Air Bullet" from the forbidden scroll... and has apparently also learned "Exploding Shadow Clone Jutsu" also from the forbidden scroll... and Kurama starts voluntarily communicating and then giving chakra to Naruto with a less than ten minute discussion while being really up front about the negative affects of using too much Tailed Beast chakra and even teaches Naruto "Beast Wave Palm"... and Hiruzen is mentioned having taught Naruto some Earth Release.

Also Sasuke or rather "Satsuki" is disguising herself as a boy to protect herself from the "Clan Restoration Act" seen in various Naruto Harem fanfic because apparently this setting has that any woman who is the last of her clan is not allowed out of the village without having enough children first. She specifically says, quote "I just want to be free! To be able to find someone who would like me, cares for me, even loves me for being me! I just want to be a normal girl and a proud kunoichi.", not even mentioning the clan massacre and genjutsu mind rape or indicating desire for revenge on her brother as a focus. That leads her to befriending Naruto immediately and inviting him to stay at the Uchiha compound over night after he finds out she's a girl. It should be noted that the single minded focus on revenge is largely why Sasuke was such a prodigy before even becoming a genin in canon, but Satsuki is still at least at the same skill level despite lacking that motivating focus apparently.

That is all in the first chapter.

Second chapter, Sakura is swapped with Hinata in Team Seven because Hiruzen thinks Sakura would just ignore caring about Naruto as a team mate and just fawn over "Sasuke". While not incorrect in that assessment as it does happen in canon she does dial back her Sasuke fangirling rather quickly even though it doesn't go away entirely mainly because of the realities of being a ninja sinking in. The reasoning itself makes no sense either because Hiruzen explicitly acknowledges in that same scene that he is aware Sasuke is actually Satsuki. It seems like he's assuming Sakura would still have the same interest after inevitably finding the boy she's fawning over is actually a she or that finding out later on would cause some problems? It's not like that could be hidden in the long term if the three of them are working together closely as a team. It's nonsensical and is obviously the author coming up with a flimsy excuse for getting rid of Sakura while having Hinata on Team 7. Most of the rest of the chapter is just kinda awkward Satsuki and Naruto interaction with Satsuki giving a rant about Sakura's flaws and bluntly telling Naruto about Hinata's interest in him then at the end having a brief sexual fantasy about Naruto. Also a flashback reveals Kurama explained how Shadow Clones can be used to train faster.

Lost interest after that and just skimmed some parts and went through some of the fanfic author's descriptions and explanations of various art (the fic itself is nearly 1.4 million words long by the way). Apparently Sakura is a villain and crazy in this. She eventually gets Orochimaru's Curse Mark and nearly kills Ino which is apparently why she's missing an arm in some of the art here. Not surprising it was going with the classic fanfic trope of "character the author dislikes is now a psychopathic villain" just from reading the second chapter and the explicit "Sakura and Council bashing" in the description. Not really sure why Orochimaru bothered to curse Sakura since the entire point of doing that to Sasuke was so he could manipulate his anger and eventually steal his body to have the Sharingan. I don't know why some of the art shows Satsuki and Hinata having red chakra cloaks and I don't really care, but the red headed guy is supposed to be Kurama in humanoid form.

Weirdly the various art for this fic has the characters looking noticeably older and developed than they should be. Most if not all of the fic seems to take place before the time skip in the manga and anime and the second chapter explicitly mentions Satsuki and Naruto being twelve as in canon at that point.

Also nearly all the art I can find of this fic explicitly is mentioned as being commissioned by the fanfic's author... so don't be fooled into thinking is popular enough to get a lot of art from others for being good and well written.

TLDR, the art commissioned for this is mostly good, but from what I bothered to read the fanfic is not.

Last edited on 19 August 2022, 08:26.

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Category "Imageset" is ONLY for works of PORNOGRAPHIC nature.

More to that - artist is Brazilian.

Which means - THIS IS WESTERN NON-H, AND SHOULD GO TO "MISC" CATEGORY REGARDLESS OF ANY OTHER FACTORS.

https://www.deviantart.com/alinesm
https://ehwiki.org/wiki/Gallery_Categories#Miscellaneous
https://ehwiki.org/wiki/western_non-h

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Yeah that’s nice and all: now where the boobies at?

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Alternate Universe Naruto ?
Sure, I don't mind much
But, now onto the real questions: Where are the boobs?

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Genderbend Sasuke looks like a worse Nanashi Uchiha.

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