Sorry if the script is scruffy. Wrote it out almost a decade ago and it's been stuck unfinished in my files all that time.

I tried the Chines upload thing and colorized the girl in the first page, how is it?

Better late than never. :) Thanks for sharing!

RAW: https://e-hentai.org/s/be226a95b2/390367-265

You forgot a bubble in the bottom left panel of page 13 https://e-hentai.org/s/a6f4002daa/3954049-13

Base +48