Its a good concept and visually looks good. I do find the storytelling questionable. Like the weird events betwen seeign his girlfriend, her offering a dildo randomly, and him just immediately wanting to use it in her room.
Agreed. Concepts are great. Are is really good. It could use a bit more thought in the story side of things. Still a great story, just could use some more bones, but at least your not just cramming it with filler.