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Pretty good, story seems of to a decent start.

Not sure why she has a bulge in picture 30 /32 though....
Also consistency seems to have broken. Grey shorts up to page 31 and then they go black.

Base +9

Thanks for the feedback @seenthat I fixed the color issues with the shorts, All seem good now😊

Base +6

For someone who only needed a month to invent a sex changing machine she's not that bright when it comes to human interaction.
As for feedback the language probably needs a little adjustment for example on page 21 "Wait ... Why my heart start beating again right after I saw a man model?? What's happening to me" would read better as "Wait ... Why did my heart start beating again right after I saw a male model?? What's happening to me." just little sentences her and there through it where it needs an extra word to flow like normal dialogue or a different word chance. Here for example the inclusion of did and changing man to male.

Base +6