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Pretty good, story seems of to a decent start.

Not sure why she has a bulge in picture 30 /32 though....
Also consistency seems to have broken. Grey shorts up to page 31 and then they go black.

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Thanks for the feedback @seenthat I fixed the color issues with the shorts, All seem good now😊

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For someone who only needed a month to invent a sex changing machine she's not that bright when it comes to human interaction.
As for feedback the language probably needs a little adjustment for example on page 21 "Wait ... Why my heart start beating again right after I saw a man model?? What's happening to me" would read better as "Wait ... Why did my heart start beating again right after I saw a male model?? What's happening to me." just little sentences her and there through it where it needs an extra word to flow like normal dialogue or a different word chance. Here for example the inclusion of did and changing man to male.

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Thank you for the feedback, @Senkoau I'll work on improving the dialogue writing for the next update. Really appreciate the feedback ❤️

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Everything looks really good so far. Especially with this having been done with AI. I'm looking forward to seeing where you take the story.

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60k and you knowing my home address would have my worrying about stalkers and kidnapping to be honest. That or that this is a scheme by the roommate and he's the one paying the money. Kind of want to see her out in public and interacting with other men to see if its unfamiliar hormones and mind driving her or an actual attraction to Noah.

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Hi, @Senkoau, The person behind the 60k is gonna get revealed pretty soon (not who you’re probably thinking lol). Also not sure if I wanna throw her out in public just yet though. Kinda feels like more roommate interactions would be way more fun rn. Idk, I might just throw up a poll and let y’all decide what the next update should focus on.

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Everyone has a different opinion, that's why their opinions not facts :) for me I just would like to know if something in the process is making her boy crazy or if their existing friendship is causing changing responses now she is a girl. As for fun well nothing says you can't keep the roommate interactions but with her trying to also process while she likes an attrctive man her fantasies keep picturing him. rather than her universes chris hemsworth. Especially if she deliberately tries to fight it by finding an attractive naked guy on the computer, masturbating to him then half way starting to picture the roommate instead. Come to think of it that would also answer the is it all men or just him question without her going outside.

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