RJ01378457

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Implied the MC offed himself.

Base +23

Usual setting about government mandated sex in order to combat the declining birthrates, once civilians grow over 12 years old they go under a mandatory exam to evaluate their sperm potency (boys) and conception fertility (girls) ; Takashi Suzuki wishes to officially use the start of their civic duty to initiate a relationship with his crush Arisa Ueno, he proposes this to her and she accepts, Takashi is so happy! However, when evaluation results come Takashi is not in the list of students who will form pairs to breed, while Aria passed with flying colors and what’s more the class delinquent Eiichi Saruta passed with astounding results, his seed is top notch and her eggs are very fertile, Takashi desperately asks the teacher why his name wasn’t in roll call, the teacher just replied Takashi needs to be revaluated, Eiichi interjects by saying Takashi’s sperm is not good enough for the program then? Takashi can’t believe this is happening; he can’t be with Arisa for now.

Takashi believes there must have been some kind of mistake with his testing, surely a revaluation will make things right, he apologizes to Arisa, Eiichi interjects again saying pregnancies with inferior seed are no good, but Takashi insists his sperm is strong, he will prove it! Huh, is that so, but Eiichi whispers on Arisa’s ears about the serious consequences of disobeying the evaluation to get pregnant by someone deemed unsuitable, their society has shaped all merits around potent males and fertile females - career prospects, college applications, job offers, everything - girls in particular have pensions for assisting their pregnancy, but a top rank girl like Arisa would be in hot water if she conceived with an inferior seed, all those benefits? Gone once the embryo is evaluated…

With that Eiichi ropes Arisa to become his partner as she fears becoming a societal pariah for going against the program, she tries to act frigid to show she doesn’t like Eiichi at all but the guy knows to handle a woman so Arisa slowly caves in; meanwhile Takashi hasn’t seen Arisa in a while, he messages her still promising a new evaluation will show his sperm is great too, so please wait for him! However, Arisa hasn’t been replying, which makes him worried so Arisa finally replies saying everything is fine, she is just a little busy, but unbeknownst to Takashi his precious crush has been doing with Eiichi all this time!

Takashi’s relief immediately turns to worry again when he finally sees Arisa again at school, she changed her looks a little and is acting distant to him, he desperately asks what’s wrong? Arisa just weakly tells Takashi to please get away from her, Eiichi drops by and tells Takashi to his face to wake the fuck up and read the room, why can’t he accept his sperm is trash? Someone like him shouldn’t be around a top fertility grader like Arisa, she should be with someone of equal standing like Eiichi, Takashi tries to talk back, saying Arisa isn’t superficial like that! He loves for real, oh yeah? Eiichi dares Takashi to come by the equipment shed later and see for himself who Arisa really is and who she belongs with.

Takashi is sure Arisa rejected Eiichi and left but he nervously goes to the equipment room to check, and he starts hearing moans right away, Takashi’s resolve crumbles, he cannot believe Arisa is acting like she is completely under Eiichi’s control, absolutely loving doing with him, but his heart truly breaks when Eiichi specifically dares Arisa to tell who she wants to have a baby with, Eiichi’s baby for sure! Not Takashi he asks? Nope, Arisa doesn’t want an inferior seed to fertilize her, she wants a superior seed!

A while later in class…

Yes, visual storytelling implications, the flowers in the desk signifies mourning, although it is also used by bullies wishing you were dead; at any case nothing is said; the ending is the teacher giving the test results where Eiichi already impregnated Arisa before every other couple, everyone in class praises him for having such excellent sperm, and Arisa is visibly already fallen or him; but one student casually asks the teacher where is Takashi, the teacher simply says Takashi failed his revaluation too so Takashi is just taking some time off to rest… well then if that’s so the class resumes singing their praise for Eiichi, with some girls wishing to be impregnated by him too, and some others laughing at Takashi for having weak sperm and saying he always looked kind of gross, furthering the idea that sperm potency and fertility rate really is tied to how attractive one in their world as well, THE END.
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Yeah, if Takashi really offed himself and the school is hiding it while everyone laughs at his sperm performance and ripping on his looks, then that’s some grim outcome.

Base +22, nowittycomment +18, STAR-KNIGHT +6