any tips on how to make it better are appriciated

@Paul190306

Learn to draw instead of wasting energy on AI slop

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yeah you're right i'm sorry man won't post slop again

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If you started by tracing these lines, you might have something to start with. Also try tracing other artists instead of reverse machine vision since MV can only do averages with no understanding

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if you genuinely want to learn how to draw, i'd reccomend picking up "you can draw in 30 days" by Mark Kistler or "Drawing on the right side of the brain" by Betty Edwards. both do a good job at teaching you the basics of drawing and helping you build the confidence to develop your skills further. remember to both draw for fun, but also study. set aside time every day for both.

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Not slop at all. don't apologize to trolls. you did whole story, even if it was simple.

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Keep working on your stories.

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It's great already, augmentation stories are few and far between always good to see more.

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Bimbofication stories, especially those involving surgery, are always welcome. Please keep making them! My only request is that there be a sex scene at the end once she’s been fully bimbofied.

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