Artist name?

Base +6

And on the last page it's revealed that all of this was a dream of Chandler's and that the real Chad, stud and wife stealer, was always Lincoln Loud.

Base +5, fighterzer98 -7, theboredotaku +7

oh my god this might be the worst art yet!

Base +8, captaindope +6, roitofemotions +6, fighterzer98 +7, theboredotaku -7, sligy +14

Artist even had to say "breeded" is a word.

Base +8, fighterzer98 +7, captaindope +6, sligy +14

Ugly shit, better to purge this from this website.

Base +11, kemono69 +16, fighterzer98 +7, theboredotaku -7

ugly ass art. take drawing lessons

Base +8, kemono69 +16, fighterzer98 +7, theboredotaku -7, sligy +14

What in the deviantart...

Base +6, kemono69 +16, fighterzer98 +7, theboredotaku -7

"ARtiSt" should kill himself

Base +10, theboredotaku -7

Wtf is this shit.

Holy fuck.

Base +6, theboredotaku -7, kemono69 +16, sligy +14

The artist only draws the artwork, but I'm the one who writes the script, and I'm a huge fan of NTR, so redirect all your hate towards me.

Base +6

Cast it into the fire

Base +5, majob +6, kemono69 +16, sligy +14

Both AragiosYellow and Mongios need to be cast into the fire for this crap. Given this is Argaios’s idea, it’s an underdeveloped excuse of a comic. This ugly shit is not enjoyable at all.

Base +1

NTR is like that, it's not supposed to be fun. The fanfic is exclusively for NTR fans and I'm a big fan and watch a lot of South Park, so of course I'm going to be harsh in the script.

I don't support anything that happens in the comic in real life, if you don't like it, don't read it, but the comic will continue and if I can, I'll be even harsher.

Base +6

Argaios' script isn't the issue, this godforsaken art is

Base +5

The artist is just starting to draw; he still has a lot to learn. Art will evolve with time.

Base +6

That's assuming it does. Maybe it will and maybe it won't. But the story's idea has done irreparable damage. So even if the artist does improve and do more art, they've got an... unfortunate blemish on their record. You say NTR is not supposed to be fun... but its execution is what makes a difference. There is a chance NTR can be fun. there are comics out there that made it work. Think about it.

Base +1, kemono69 +16

The artist was already drawing NTR before I offered him this story. Furthermore, I'm more of a fan of heavier NTR, which shows no mercy to the characters and provokes tremendous hatred in those who see it.

But for an NTR fan like me, it's something enjoyable to watch. Incidentally, the artist and I are working on an SFW project; after chapter 1 is finished, we'll take a break and start this project.

Base +6

I like NTR too, but the way it's performed in this "comic" is simply cringe. It seems to me that you didn't create this story for the public to enjoy but only yourself. The reviews, the general one star, and your own personal admission says this.

Base +1, kemono69 +16, sligy +14

This story is for myself and a specific audience that enjoys much heavier NTR. The other story, which will be for the general public, will be SFW and will focus on horror and survival. My goal is to create a story that I've always wanted to see but that no one has done yet. As the saying goes, "If you want something done right, do it yourself." I'm writing this story inspired by several others I've read here, stories so intense that they make you wonder, "How does anyone have the courage to publish this?"

Base +6