Source: https://www.dmm.co.jp/dc/doujin/-/detail/=/cid=d_425179/

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Translated by Nubi

always like this.

Base +6, Reasons2B +6

Thank you for your hard work, please continue translate with chapters two and three, and don't forget to use the source's original resolution

Base +6, Reasons2B -6

A better translation with fewer errors than the other one and source quality resolution. Only gripe I have is that some of the art of her face was modified in various pages. It's most notable on page 67. A shame as the original makes her look like she's busting a fat nut compared to this version. Not sure why those arbitrary edits were made.

Base +6, senn221 +10

The good part of this garbage is the karma biting hard that FMC slut in the end

Base +6, Reasons2B -6, gradius +6

@monkeethroat
Her face wasn't amended at all as part of the translation (nor any other art elements). It was a freshly bought copy of the source though, so the author may have updated it themselves? Not sure on that one!

@kirin99
The plan is to do chapters 2 and 3 too :)

Base +6

Thank you.

Also I think I prefer the redone art to the first release, even that the kind of twisted, almost silly expressions have something to them as well.

Base +8