I'm ESL but some of these are pretty bad:

2:
"what the fuck" she's not swearing in the original
"this old women"

3:
"seeing a women with heavy moaning"
"A lot of people who doesn't like"

4:
"A grown mature women images getting destroyed"
"shameful face that she would never show it to her family"

5:
"I would be happy if your taste change a little..."

7:
"It's been 3 month since I'm having an affair"
"with one of my son's classmate"
"I have a secret that I must keep it up from him"
"I'm still just a kids for you"
"I'm just lose my confidence"

8:
"hiding this the from you whole time"
"when me and my husband having sex"

9:
"wirrying"

12:
"you're not disgusting by it"

13:
"more faster"

14:
"I have sadistic side towards all of my friend's mom"

15:
"And you're the one who make my dreams come true"

18:
"you dumb ass" unnecessary swearing
"it's reflecting your beautiful and sexy bodies"

19:
"dammit" unnecessary swearing

22:
"with an old women like me"

23:
"will you re-marry with me"
"to marry with old woman like me"

24:
"We're going to lives together"
"with plenty of love from now"

25:
"I'm going to impregnated you baby", "Ahh!! Yes!! Harder, honey!!" no such exclamations in the original, should be 3 bubbles with sound effects.

Raw: https://e-hentai.org/g/2460105/fd4c498fa2/ pages 5-8, 91-110

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Wcombo123 is a mtl'er passing off as a legit tl'er. That's why so many of his uploads all have basic grammatical errors.

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