I am looking for someone who is good at english and can proofread my future translations, if you can help me with that, leave a message here or send an email to ramza022@hotmail.com please. Thanks

This one of my first translation and editing work, and the first one I've ever uploaded here.
I am not a native english speaker, so maybe I did some mistakes in texts. If this is the case, if you guys
have any suggestion or correction at all, please tell me so I can do better next time.

Translating the sfx was especially hard for me, because I don't really know how the onomatopoeias works in English, but I was liking the photoshop so much that I ended up trying it anyway. Please tell me if the result was ok or not.

About the story, I am not a big fan of tentacles, but I really like young girls having it with monsters. I've always liked Pokemon (just the old ones actually) and the female charachters are also hot, so I started by translating this one.

really really nice
good job^^

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Aside from a few grammatical errors at the beginning, this is real solid for a first solo translation and editing effort. Kudos for going the extra mile to translate SFX; add that to the fact that you picked a doujin with content right to my tastes, excellent job.

Looking forward to future uploads should you manage them. Rock on.

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The colour used to erase the Japanese text isn't absolute white.

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Thanks guys, I probably will do the another Stapspats pokemon doujinshi next.

@xanzero Well observed, I never thought someone would notice it.

@KES awesome, this site will really help me.

@MishaLover My native language is Portuguese, I'll send you a pm about the proofreading, thanks for volunteering.

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If you need a proof reader I got all the free time in the world to lend a hand, I can't translate from original language to English but I would be happy to help make the English better.

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I can help with proofreading. What is your native language? Mine is English, but I know a little bit of Spanish.

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Nice work. Also I can refer a site to you:
http://thejadednetwork.com/sfx/
My onomatopoeia reference. Hope it helps.

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In DS : You train pokemon
In Hentai : Pokemon train you ^~^

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this is probably one of the best heanti comics ive ever seen. i demand a sequel.

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Good job, great translation, hopefully you can translate other works by this artist

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