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[Amulai Okashi Seisakusho (Ame no Machi)] Hyoui AV AV Joyuu no Karada o Sukihoudai Suru Hanashi | Possession AV: A story about doing whatever you want with a porn star's body [English]

[あむぁいおかし製作所(あめのまち)]憑依AV AV女優のカラダを好き放題する話 [英訳]

Doujinshi
Posted:2026-07-05 20:38
Parent:None
Visible:Yes
Language:English  
File Size:16.85 MiB
Length:35 pages
Favorited:245 times
Rating:
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Average: 1.57

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Posted on 05 July 2026, 20:38 by:   Abstractdreamer    PM
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if you got time to post and complain then you can you do a better translation. I don't even read the comments section so this doesn't affect me. Any post below mine that complaining about this than go suk some monkey b@lls and get monkey pox bish.
Posted on 05 July 2026, 22:44 by:   nargaflarga    PM
Score +341
At the risk of the uploader's "monkey pox" I will in fact complain about your obvious MTL translation. Not only that, but you were so lazy you didn't even keep the text in the bubbles and never titled the post for the actual work you "translated." And for someone who claims they don't read comments you sure do sound salty about it. Sometimes it's better to release nothing than to release a half-baked bastardization of someone's work.
Posted on 05 July 2026, 23:03 by:   Bufuman    PM
Score +277
"I don't read the comments section so I totally wouldn't know that people keep dunking on me for my shitty posts, also I'm awesome and y'all suck my mommy said so"

lmao enjoy the block list bro
Posted on 06 July 2026, 11:35 by:   kithrin    PM
Score +90
what got me is that he onlt labled it with the group name and not name of the dojin
Posted on 06 July 2026, 13:20 by:   terry    PM
Score +91
tagging rtl
Posted on 06 July 2026, 13:39 by:   ElisaG    PM
Score +56
Well, the story is itself quite interesting, as there's a movie being filmed about possession, so the possessed actress can fool her partner with the excuse she was just acting, and everyone thought it was a great performance.
Posted on 07 July 2026, 00:37 by:   phoenixneo1630    PM
Score +93
You've been at this for months now. You've seen the complaints (given your initial comment), yet you've clearly not taken them to heart. I've looked through your past posts and keep seeing the same things done. So let me give you some advice.

1.) If you want to use MTL, fine. Just please add it to the title. You'll still get readers. Trust me. There are people who don't care. Though I think it'll turn out better if you learn the language yourself. That way, you can spot the mistakes that MTL tends to make.
2.) Proofread. Go through what you've written and see if it makes sense. Read the story as a whole. Don't just trust the MTL to be 100% correct. It's not.
3.) Practice your type-setting. Adjust your font size if necessary. Keep everything within bubbles.
4.) Try using different fonts. You can use different ones for moans, yelling, etc.
5.) Learn to take criticism. This is the internet. You'll get people who'll only complain, sure. But you'll also find ways to improve. You won't please everyone. But you'll alienate everyone by telling your readers to "suk some monkey b@lls".

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