Well, I guess... good luck girls?

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The fnck are we supposed to goon in here? Big buff naked monster men?

Give us some action dammit

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Bahaha! That's it, I'm making this a happy story. They escape nothing happens to them at all. lol

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Love the start...and I wonder what(s happening in the meantime on a lunar casino :)

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@Garfieldxander04 I know... I have a problem. I get side tracked by ideas and then have 0 interest in going back. I'll finish both Lunar Casino and Helldivers in month of July. I need to stop getting excited about new ideas. lol

I have around 15 different not posted here stories started with each around 50 pages, this is how bad my ADHD is when creating this stuff...

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Please don't stop having new ideas ;). It's also noce to have so many different stories!

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This is one of the best works ... thank you also for the effort to keep the outfits to the girls!

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Thanks and no problem on the outfits! The text is the hardest part for me. I personally really enjoy the lore part of the stories. I really struggle with what the aliens say to the girls in all my stories. I don't want them to be repetitive, not sure how far I should take certain things they tell the girls, and don't want the text to sound stupid. I wish there was a better way to write the text. I come up with it all myself, I wish there were better uncensored text tools or AI for that to bounce ideas off of. If anyone has ideas, I'm all about them!

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Update:
Well, would you looked at that....

I jorked to it 👍

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I love the lore too... and the build-up before the storm :). Maybe a few more pics to see the girls' fate at the end would add to the story too ;). But yet again a great story. Actually if I had more time I think I would love to add some dialog myself :)

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@Garfieldxander04 @Kilrathi What should the next story be about?

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I was going to say "the Island 2", but it seems you were way ahead of me :D . Maybe some college story, with a very deviant sports team playing with cheerleaders :)

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Yea. I've had the girls for Island 2 I wanted to use ready for a while, have just been trying to figure out the actual story, so it was different than the first one. Oh I like that idea you have! I do some tests.

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Fantastic! And now I'm back to a photoshoot :)

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